Audience essay feedback and learner response

Audience essay feedback:

WWW:

• Some examples provided on how the internet has affected an industry e.g. how Netflix has impacted how audiences engage with the Film and TV industry.

• Some subject terminology identified in your writing e.g. ‘consumers, bedroom bands, streaming platforms’

EBI:

• Lacking enough connectives to connect each paragraph together. Consider removing the sub-headings and instead constantly linking it back to the statement

• Lacking audience theory in your essay e.g. ‘Uses and Gratifications, active and passive audiences’

1) What was the word count for your essay?

My word count was 663 words.

2) What was your strongest paragraph? Why do you think it was better than others?

I think my strongest paragraph was Film and TV as i used examples to back my point e.g Netflix and i also think that i gave good advantages and disadvantage points.

3) What was your weakest paragraph? Why do you think it wasn't as good as others?

I think my weakest paragraph was Newspaper because i didn't use a lot of media terminology in this paragraph and didn't give good,strong points.

4) How can you improve your extended writing in GCSE Media Studies in future?

I can improve my extended writing in GCSE Media Studies in the future by making sure to use media terminology and making sure to include the relevant instruction. e.g. in this case Audience Theory.

5) Write ONE thing you have learned about the internet, audience and industry from completing this essay.

I've learnt that the audience interacts a lot more these days with the internet due to the internet evolving more and more giving the audience more power.